Grades in Primary School Is Feedback - Not Punishment
Swedish children have suffered enough from SAP and their Marxist allies' ideas of education, namely branding every individual equal in all aspects, including their intelligence and academic potential. This is not good for the children, rather the opposite as numerous gifted children does not receive enough attention and assistance at the early stages of life which in turn leads to a decline in how much the child actually cares about her/his education. Now if the average gifted child got told she/he is exceptionally intelligent or particularly good at something at an early stage it would be safe to say that she/he would feel acknowledged and that her/his achievements are appreciated; which in turn leads to increased focus and effort concerning her/his studies.
Sweden is a part of the European Union, which means that we are cooperating with other countries within specific fields such as trying to combat and control international criminality and certain issues concerning the environment. Now would it be good to profile Sweden within the European Union as a developing country when it comes to education? It is safe to admit that this is nothing which would be of benefit for Sweden, its citizens or Sweden's international credibility as a country where we care for our children's education and future. However this is exactly what is happening at this very moment, as the other countries within the European Union do grade their students at much earlier stages in school.
There are critics of this reform, however their major argument is that children should be allowed to be children as long as possible; an argument which sounds quite reactionary. These critics are more often than not partisans of SAP and its allies, which ironically has housed a couple of questionable figures in Swedish politics such as Gudrun Schyman. This lady has been caught red-handed stating rash ideas such as "every child should receive an Acceptable grade by default"; the support of this statement was ironically that children should not feel any stress or pressure concerning school. This support undermines itself though; the fabricated story of pressured and stressed children where grades would further fuel their misery is comfortably dismissed by the fact that today's children have very much spare time and some of that spare time could easily be spent on studies without breaking the children.
To conclude this it would be appropriate to state that children would benefit from receiving grades in Primary School, as it would encourage future efforts and academic achievements. This reform would help profile Sweden as a pushing country in the European Union, which matters as the European Union is becoming more and more important in the long run.
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Victor!
SvaraRaderaYou have once again managed to write a very good essay; well structured, clearly stated and properly divided into coherent paragraphs.
However, I have some things I would like to comments upon:
The following sentence, from the first paragraph, seems to be a bit long and incoherent.
“This is not good for the children, rather the opposite as numerous gifted children does not receive enough attention and assistance at the early stages of life which in turn leads to a decline in how much the child actually cares about her/his education.”
Maybe it would be better to divide it into two sentences, where the first deals with the fact that children don’t receive enough attention and the second one describes the consequence of this.
I realize that it could be quite hard to develop one’s ideas properly in such a short text. But nevertheless. You mention that it would not be good “to profile Sweden within the European Union as a developing country when it comes to education”, but you do not really explain why this would be a consequence of not grading kids in Primary School. Perhaps it would be more convincing and credible if you show the reader your line of thought.
That quote from Gudrun Schyman, is that an actual quote? Cause if it isn’t I’m not completely sure that you are allowed to use quotation marks the way you have done. But if it is, don’t mind this comment J
Could you think of any other counterarguments? You only mention one in your text and, as you write, it isn’t really an effective one and therefore not much to argue about. Can you think of any that are more cogent and reasonable?
It is a really good argumentative essay, because it spurs the reader to respond to it. If you have read my blog you might have noticed that you and I have completely different views on this subject and I definitely felt that I wanted to argue against your claims. This reaction shows very well that you have succeeded in writing a good argumentative essay that certainly could be a basis of debate. Well done!
Thank you for your feedback, Hanna. I agree with your points regarding the structure of the text once again, but as you said it can be difficult to get every point across in such a short text. I'm quite bad at explaining my points and thoughts without writing a substantial amount of text about it.
SvaraRaderaThe quote from Gudrun is an actual quote: "Jag tycker inte att det ska finnas betyg i grundskolan, där ungarna sorteras efter prestation. Alla ska vara godkända." Which is essentially what I wrote in my quote. I think I found it while browsing Flashback a couple of years ago, and it has been stuck in my head since then.
Concerning other counterarguments I'm not really sure. I will read your blog when I have finished my feedback for Jenny's text, and see if that opens my mind a bit. I had this image of Gudrun Schyman and other leftists in my mind when I wrote this text, and had a really hard time thinking about intelligent counterarguments coming from that side of the river. And to be fair I did not really have the time to read up on both sides' arguments regarding this issue, my main goal with this text was to make fun out of the other part of the discussion to make my points sound more valid than they perhaps are.
Once again thank you for your great feedback, I will read your text as soon as I can and see if I find it persuasive!
Oh Victor, it's a good thing I'm not supposed to assess your opinions but only your writing... which is quite good, as usual! VERY good comments by Hanna too! /Anna
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